The
series of tragical events
Today was a mirthful day (yeah right!) Okay, I’ll change that
sentence; today was supposed to be a mirthful day however it turned out to be
an exceedingly calamitous day. It all started this morning; despite the fact
that it was almost noon. I woke up just in time to see ‘Skyfall’ when my mum
saw me and said"Zain, you look awful". I replied "Thanks"
in a way that I loathed her comment but I actually loved her statement. Then
out of nowhere my dad appeared and gave my mum tea; just have a slight guess what
happened next?
He spilled it on my mum’s new outfit. You should have seen my
mum’s face… I don’t want to go in further detail. Well then my brother came up
and he said he wanted me to buy him a car as big as a frog (that’s how he
described it). My dad agreed with him and there was nothing for me to do but
listen so I went to ‘Delhaize’ with my brother plus he bought a car which was
€20 while we were at the shop my mother was making pancakes also when we came
back to tell her that my brother insisted to buy the dear car she ignored me
and mum flipped the pancake up but instead of catching it the pancake fell
right into my face.. a terrible way to end a terrible day.
Dear Zain,
If you want to enter the 100 Word Challenge, you will have to reduce the number of words in this piece of writing, as I am unable to submit it with a 250 word count!!
I am sure that you can do this...
Mrs T.
Why is Zain allowed 250 words?
ReplyDeleteHe isn't; please read what I have written at the end of his essay!
ReplyDeleteMrs T.
Mrs Tranter,
ReplyDeleteThe showcase for week 18 is going to be published today!
I am checking it every hour because I don't know the time.
Neither do I!
ReplyDeleteMrs T