IN THE CLOUDS
I inactively opened my eyes and glanced around. Abruptly I perceived
that I was standing on layers of blue pregnant CLOUDS!! I fancied screaming
however no sound came out.
I couldn’t help
being obstreperous, – it was rare that I panicked - hopped from to cloud (the
clouds were like trampolines) when I incorrectly positioned my right foot, I knew it was
too late to pull back. “Oh no!!” I said to myself. I fell. It was raining.
The relentless driving rain forced down;
with its mighty points that pierced my soft skin like daggers. I realised that I was falling out of the blue…
Dear Ishita,
ReplyDeleteWell done for attempting to use such sophisticated vocabulary, as well as dashes and brackets. I really enjoyed reading this.
Great work!
Mrs T.