FLYING
PANCAKE
I had woken up
from a deep sleep and was on my way to brush my teeth when I smelt the
delicious pancake aroma. Quickly but carefully I brushed my teeth then ran
downstairs with a feeling of exhilaration seething inside me. I entered the
kitchen with enthusiasm and greeted my family then calmly sat down. My
mother flicked a pancake in the air and it landed in my dad's plate .The
next one landed in my sister's plate, it was my turn Mum flipped the pancake up but , instead
of landing in my plate it fell on me.
A brilliant story! You have used really good vocabulary like aroma, exhilaration and seething.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Ruvarashe,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you making a terrific effort to improve your word choice.
Mrs T.
Oh no! I hope you still got to eat the pancake after it feel on you- how unfortunate. This is a great piece of writing, your choice of words are fantastic. Well done Ruvarashe.
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