Pancake
catastrophe
Today was Pancake Day! As I woke up, my nose was filled with the sweet
essence of PANCAKES! I whizzed downstairs. My sister, dad and Coco (my dog)
were at the table.“What
took you so long?”questioned
mum.I needed an excuse.“Well.........Coco
stole my T-shirt”
I replied.Then mum flipped the pancake
up but instead of landing on my plate, Coco sprang up with her jaws wide
open and it landed in her mouth.“Nevermind,
I'll have another one ”
I said.“Sorry
love, but I've run out of eggs”sighed
mum. NOOOOOOOO !It couldn't be!
Dear Ishika,
ReplyDeleteSuper, varied punctuation and excellent alternatives for the word 'said'!
I think that we ran out of eggs at a Year 6 baking day?
Mrs T.