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Time for painting. I rejoiced as I got
dressed. Just as I was heading out, my mum got a call. She informed me that my
teacher wasn’t feeling well. I was downcast because I was to finish my favorite
painting; a dog. My mom suggested that I do a canvas at home.
I started with my canvas kit. As I started
drawing on the canvas, the canvas tore! I searched on the internet for what
went wrong. The answer was, I was supposed to draw with a piece of coal. They didn’t mention that on the packet.
I really liked the way you began this with a short sentence and I enjoyed the story.
ReplyDeleteSuper work, Tisya,
Mrs T.
What a strange thing to happen Tisya! I love the way you built up to the prompt too! Thanks you for joining 100WC!
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ReplyDeleteCould I ask you to complete the sign up form please so that I have your contact details in case we want to showcase one of your entries!
Many thanks
I have sent an email to Mrs Skinner.
ReplyDeleteMrs T.
Well done Tisya. I loved your story. I thought you used great description and I liked the way you built up to the prompt.
ReplyDeleteDebbie (team 100wc)
Really nice story Tisya....it seems as if you are going to be in the showcase!!!
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