Pancakes
in my plate?? Oh oH!
We were
in the garden eating pancakes for lunch. It was a day before Shrove’s Tuesday and
mum was practicing. I watched her as she did flips with the pancake. It was the
second time she was doing the race. So she did well until she tried to do a
somersault with the pancake. Mum flipped
the pancake but it ended up in my plate. It wasn't that bad because I was
going to ask my dad for more but if my mum did that tomorrow onto the ground
then she’d be disqualified. I thought of the beautiful, magical blue gem I
found last summer...… ……...
Tisya, I really enjoyed the twist at the end - a useful and clever device. This is so you...Different thoughts darting through your imagination!
ReplyDeleteMrs T.
Really nice story, Tisya...but maybe, in your next story, you could try to use a little more adventurous vocabulary to add more interest.
ReplyDeleteTisya, I liked how your 100WC changed at the end, this captured me. I want to know where you found this gem. That was a clever piece of writing, well done.
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