My Friend, and his world
Hooray! It was Sunday!
The day I could goof off, play video games and
play sport in the basement.
Well, today started badly, I crashed into the
floor when I got into bed, used my shaving cream instead of toothpaste and
crashed a plate at breakfast. I tried playing video games but suddenly, out of the blue, something had gone
wrong with them, I tried again for 2 minutes, and gave up. I went down for
sport in the basement. I took all my cricket equipment and safety gear. I had a
friend. In the basement. A flying thing. A huge, mythical, dragon ‼
Dear Rishikesh,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this 'punchy' 100 word challenge; the use of the short sentence for dramatic effect worked well.
Keep up the good work.
Mrs T.
This is a good entry for the 100WC! I am impressed with your use of longer and shorter sentences to create more drama in your story. I hope your Sunday didn't start that badly!
ReplyDeleteThx Anonymous
DeleteThx Mrs.T
ReplyDeleteMrs.T. Am I allowed to edit my entry?
ReplyDeleteThere'll still be 104 words.??
What a wonderful story. What a creative use of the prompt. Really enjoyed reading your story!!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work
keep writing
Mr Overton
Leicester
100 WC Team