Brownie
Debacle!
Today was mum’s birthday! Caroline
woke up early to prepare her mum’s breakfast. The kitchen was a warm welcoming
room gleaming with polished wood. The sun spilt through the windows. Without
wasting a second, the six year old followed the instructions on the packet.
When the brownie was ready, she neatly positioned it on a silver tray and entered
her mum’s bedroom. “Happy Birthday Mum! ²greeted
Caroline. Mum took a bite and a frown formed on her face. “Did you separate the
eggs from their shells?” posed mum. “Well, they
didn’t mention it on the packet!”exclaimed Caroline.
I enjoyed the way that you built up this story, and I can just imagine someone I know making these Brownies!
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Mrs T
LOL!! I really liked your story...You used excellent vocabulary!!
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