Thursday, February 21, 2013

100 Word Challenge BT Driti


The Journey Begins…

I was in my bedroom, waiting patiently. I knew it would arrive soon- it was already delayed 2 days. DING DONG!
Yippee! Finally, my wait was over; my iPhone5 was here at last! Gleefully, I pranced along to the front door and opened it. A large packet was staring up at me, pleading to tear it off.
I reached for it, oblivious of the surprise that lay inside. It was the most dazzling diamond I had ever seen; immediately, I knew it was enchanted. They didn’t mention that on the packet! My journey through the magical world had begun…
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3 comments:

  1. Mrs Skinner (UK)February 21, 2013 at 9:53 AM

    This has so much in it Driti! You could take it in so many different directions! I think maybe you could make it even better if you had a bit of a plan first so that all the parts of the story linked. sometimes that is hard though when you have so many ideas isn't it? Thank you for joining 100WC!

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  2. BollywoodBISBFebruary 23, 2013 at 5:07 PM

    Superb choice of vocabulary which really brought this story to life!
    You are a highly imaginative writer.

    Well done, Driti,
    Mrs T.

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  3. Andrew WilliamsFebruary 24, 2013 at 11:17 PM

    I completely agree Driti, an excellently constructed piece using a wide range of carefully considered vocabulary.

    Very well done indeed.

    Andrew
    Team 100wc

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