Eruption ?
''Faster,'' I shouted. The volcano was
about to erupt and we were running out of time. This was the fifth time we had
tried to find a highway but all we did was go in circles leading us nowhere
near safety. The sense of endurance was beginning to evaporate and the fierce
sense of hopelessness was rising. The car stopped suddenly and the
breath was sucked out of my lungs. My heart was pounding and I realised that I
was falling, falling, falling.With screams echoing around me, it was finally
over. Darkness and then THE END HAD JUST BEGAN !!
Wow! I really liked your story!
ReplyDeleteGoodness me, Ruvarashe, what a tense and nail-biting story; I was sitting on the edge of my seat!
ReplyDeleteWonderful work,
Mrs T.
Wow, what an exciting 100WC Ruvarashe! I love how we get straight into the excitement at the start of the story. I hope the world does not end like that any time soon!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the fantastic work!
Laura (Team 100WC)