All About Decisions
I was on a trip to the forest. I don’t
know what it was called; something that sounded like ‘worst’. I got down at the
stop. There were 2 buses waiting for me. #45 and #66. I had to make my decision
quick. Try to remember…
Yes I had to take the #45.
I reached the forest.
There was a footpath. I –instead- took
the hard path. I jumped over the fence and started my journey.
(45 minutes -or was it 45 days- later)
I found myself facing umpteen numbers
of flights of steps. Decision immediately needed. Very dark now
Lots of decisions in this story...I now want to read more to see if you made the right decisions or not! A good idea to make your story all about choices, I enjoyed reading this, Jane Hewitt team 100wc
ReplyDeleteRishikesh, I really do like your writing style, it reminds me of one of my favourite authors - fast-paced and concise.
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