The Whispering Forest
I gazed at the scene.The trees were like a
crowd of vivid green umbrellas, the branches swayed to the rhythm of the wind,
their leaves fluttering like graceful butterflies.The dew-soaked grass
glittered like a field of sparkling diamonds.I thought hard for a moment. Why
would Aunt Claire keep me away from such a beautiful forest like this?
Then whispered a voice from the bushes, “Do
you think it's Annabelle, I mean ‘The
Princess Annabelle’?”.Who
was behind the bushes and... how did they know my name? And why did they say
The Princess Annabelle?
What a wonderful description of the forest Ishika. I love the idea of the trees being like vivid green umbrellas. You have used a lot of powerful similes in this work. Great use of punctuation too. Well done.
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Ishika, this is an excellent piece of descriptive writing. I think that I shall have to make you finish the story as I must find out about Princess Annabelle...
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